Just try to add as much detail as possible, work on shading/shadows. Otherwise its fine.

awesome!!!!!

It really looks great!
I think you should try to draw her face though, it kinda looks 'empty' without it.

You shouldn't add bangs, it's too cliche and I like this 'coolish' style.

Woah, that's really good. Much better than anything I can draw.

it sucks

It's a bit crowded without any change from the character in the foreground to the character in the background (shading, highlights, ect) that gives a clear feeling of how far back she is, the flames need to be an equal distance from the end of the white in all places, the shoulder on the guy is bulging too high up. The cropping is terrible, and the balance between the characters and the logo is way off (the characters crowd the logo). Speaking of crowding the girl since there is no defining element that directly shows the distance between the characters it seems as if her right boob is pressing up against him. As well as her being as tall as him, which implies that she is taller than him when standing beside him. The colors are abusive without any real values or thick lines applied
Without the eyes the piece is a slight headache and the angle is which you shot it really makes it (as I've said before) crowded near the top where most of your detail is.

I say if you're going to avoid the eyes stylize the image, give a atiquit (if you know the right way to spell that PLEASE tell me, I've looked in dictionaries, the internet and surfed some forums to see if someone corrected my error when a friend commented them) amount of space. It looks as if you took two characters and slide them together. Feel free to PM me, I'll try to get back to you the best I can, but it you PM me it'll be easier on me.

Also thank you for voting low on Ball Click Mayfest, it was a rotten, indecent, and arbitrarily rude thing to do. It shows that he has no class, no decency, and no princible embedded into his Newgrounds heart, if he has one.

Allow me to refresh your memory:

http://andrewc12.newgrounds.com/news/
post/146274

You voted down on that and I thank you for it.

You should just do whatever you want, it already looks great without anybody's help so I'm sure you can make it look better yourself!

Awesome, but now Tekken 6 is coming out. Also, in unrelated news, you have over 30,000 blam/save points. Damn!

I think Jins shoulders are too high, or his neck is too low if you just shorten the neck line it'll be fine.

I never played Tekken in my whole life =(

Pretty good job. Maybe you could have scanned it into Flash and traced/colored it there? Still, the coloring's pretty good, especially since it was done by hand, which is pretty hard. By the way, what did you color with? On overall a good job, and it seems you can draw boobs better than I can :(
PS- Did you use a reference image?

yay the girl has big boobs!

Holy fuck, thats awesome. Youre really good at drawing. Wish i was as good as you. You got PS3? If so PM me your PSN ID!

Meh,

I don´t like the lack of detail, i like to draw an abundant amount of folds myself. Also improve on the faces.
I have a PS3.

Hey I draw decently!

And yes, some shading would be nice, and they happen not to have mouths.
Either way, pretty nice!

Sorry no i simply cannot draw but i think it looks good.

DAMMIT WHERE'S YOUR OLD PICTURE. YOU WERE HAWT.

i dont like your kind around here n****r

Good. I cant think of any criticism. I'll give it a 9.5/10

WOw nice I like it alot because I am a Tekken fan xD

Their faces are sexy.

Wow.
You have a lot of talent for drawing and things.
It looks great :D

you can draw really good its amazig even i have no idea who the are and stuff but you can draw better than me (and everyone who knows me thinks im amazing at drawing) A++ job

moar boobs NOW!

Looks pretty good, but nobody has a face...

It think it looks great I wish I could draw something like this... I can draw a mean stick figure (Beware of me you got some contest). But anyways great picture.

I could do better.

COOLL>>> keep up!! :)

cool lol

that is pretty good. it is better than what i can do

It's done very good. I draw too, but usually I'm too lazy to color my drawings. -_-

oh ive played tekken 4

Wow
Just wow

PENISES GO IN THE VAGINA

Awwww. :3

i dont have any critisism,its awsome
good drawing chicks turn me on!

I LOVE burnt lasagna, you get to taste the cheese and the crunchiness.

Sorry that this doesn't have TOO much to do with the post, but did you draw your main profile picture?

For the face aspect, look at a bunch of photos of faces and study them, and then practice drawing faces, when you do practice drawing faces, don't erase any mistakes at all, just finish it, and keep on doing that until you're content.

damn i wish i could draw like that......amazing

lol @ spamming my thread

The only "problem" I see is that its just a little crowded. But I think It looks excellent. Keep it up.

you seem like a cool person.

wanna be friends?

:3

That's amazing!

We need more spamming! ;)

cool drawing

It's old as fuck!! Why draw it???

Okay fine...I'll let my Tekken fanboy-ness reveal itself...

Jin Kazama and Kristine...whatever the hell her last name is....

gawd that looks woow

Not a huge fan of those noses, but maybe its just the absence of the whole face. hmmm... the hood looks a bit out of place. It should hide some more of the right side of his face I think. Also, his shoulders are too high. Maybe its just his left shoulder though (my left). And he's a BIT too bulky, but then again, its Tekken.

But yeah, looks good.

Niiiiiiice!
More shading required on Jins Neck.
Facial Features would be great, but you know. This rocks too.

Nice job. Keep it up. ;]