Sk8erGirl14's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Christmas Story.]

oh that Ralphy

...could have been a little more dramatic since it was so short, but it's a quick parody...

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[.apocalypse.]

umm boo! boooooo!

...looking at the loading screen, I thought to myself..."gee I wonder if this is going to be a cheesy montage still image slide show movie," :o and guess what? it most certainly was... besides the static transitions I see no effort what so ever to make this more entertaining...

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[the INTERNAUT]

kekeke

thanks for sharing that...so glad there are some things you cant unsee >.<''

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[Today, I am a MAN!]

...nice transitions

ahhh, just like real life...

...animation transitions was interesting to see...stick to blob to semi-decent animated figure...

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[Revolting Ravenger]

...mmm

...Iam not excited about this. Music was somewhat fitting, but it seemed more like background or dialogue music. A better music choice and probably a complete re-edit or redo of the trailer would be necessary to bring more excitement to this piece...

...The images were fine, a little static for any "real" animation but with a quicker pased song and perhaps more drawings you could whip up a thrilling trailer to your story...you had the right idea when the faces started to flash and give up just a glipse of what we can expect...but all the other slow parts just seeemed to do worse for the movie...

...as far as the textual content goes...it's too typical...person loses everything, vengence seeking now...it's been done, and can be done a thousand more times, but you just have to word is better, it was very cliche.

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[An eye for an eye...]

...hmmm

...title is a bit misleading, eye for an eye, but the music seems OVERLY dramatic and out of key with the whole animation...kind of a cheesy Matrix spoof I guess...

...certain animation elements are there, but falls short of any "real" animation...

and hooray for your parents supporting you...that's important...

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[PTTY: Grade 9]

shows some effort

...but I dont know if it is "scholarship" worthy...but everyone has to start somewhere...

animation is not bad, lots of room for imporvement, editing skills could use some work, maybe a few transitions here and there like screen fades from black to the movie etc...

setting this up as a portfolio piece would be a nice feature if you plan to use this as a portfolio piece, with menu system and stuff...

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swiftstylerX responds:

Well this is a pretty easy scholarship to get. The 1st place flash wasn't even that great. That's why I'm hoping if I do this for all 4 years of High School, and make it long enough and show how much I have improved, I will get 1st place.

[Cry For a Cry]

not sure the moral of the story...

...it had a nice style to it and was animated alright for the style...but the meaning leaves me a little confused, perhaps no meaning at all, just an allegorical story...? O.o

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[Robot Rukus]

audio audio audio...

...you probably working with what ya got, and it's probably a stock crappy mic. Get a decent noise cancelling one and you'd be better off...

animation is fine, comedy is fine...but audio is distracting...

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[computer people]

wow Ashley!

...I was more impressed by your audio than the animation, but the animation is simple but keys well with your audio...it's something different and reminds me much of Daft Punk's tracks...and they are like my favorite musicians evah!

are you tracks available for download on your site? Iam gonna check things out... :)

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