for the most part its good....
however it seems rather pointless and what storyline is availible is limited greatly...this might have just been a test animation or something of that nature...
you could expand and use your skills on a full length 5 minute movie in the future and I am sure it would be great....
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I wouldn't call it a test I would call it a "I'm still a not so fantabulistic animator and this is the best i can do" but thanks for the 6/10!
meh, it's okay...
get rid of those ugly black outlines on everything...makes things look just weird...
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I considered doing that, but what the hey.
I like the black lines. They give me control.
while it's good in quality, it's too short...
IDK if this will pass or die...it's just too short for such a nice piece...finish it up or make it longer or NG not for school and you could have something nice for your portfolio or something...
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wow, 2 really long and pointless intros...
your first intro to the menue is way to long and boring...then you have another one after before the actual animation part of the movie...makes for a boring movie to sit through all that crap to get to the actual movie...
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but the whole movie is a intro to the series, also if to go to scene selection you can get around all of that (not the frist one tho thats the preloader movie)
I dont really see how this is different...
from all the rest of the short little, OMG shot sombody for no reason movies...there's like 1000's of them on NG...the only think I liked about the movie was the Spongebob music...
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Yeha I can agree with you there, I wasnt expecting great reviews. But I think it didhave some originality in the style, the look of the characters and the pink background.
lol, when the guys are running...
the background is scrolling in the wrong direction, making it appear that they are running backwards...
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I've seen worse pass, but I dont think this will..
it looks like you at least have a grasp on motion tweens now...if this is blammed, just scrap the enitre project, and use it as a learning experience and start a new project...Try to improve on your drawing skills, the more you use flash the less tedious it gets and the more creative you get with the program...keep at it...
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uh... ok what ever. thanks for the review.
...well...
I got a fortune cookie here myself...lets see what it says..."you bring joy to others." hmm ugh I'd reather die in 3 minutes...
I could listen to your voice all day...not as funny as some of your other works, but you cant be 100% perfect all the time sheesh...
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i could listen to my voice too
LALALALLALALALALA
the perpectives were off...
either those are reallly small trees or the guy, not the alien is really big to?IDK?
but I can dig it...
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Ok...so you gave me a 5 becuase the perspectives were off???
WTF!
So you're the bitch that told that bitch that i'm a bitch, well listen bitch, it takes a bitch to know a bitch, bitch.
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